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【原创】旧作新改之十二：七绝·感恩节

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旧作新改之十二

七绝 · 感恩节

江自源头树有根，万千学子出师门。

满山桃李园丁醉，大爱深情雨露恩。

（首句仄起入韵式十三元韵）

附记：又到感恩节。重读六年前小诗，押韵、平仄均不合绝句规范，现依律改之。旧作新改，再学诗律，也是一番乐趣。

旧作：

感恩节

江有源头树有根，幼苗全靠春雨润。
终生不忘教诲情，感恩节里倍思恩。

作于2009年11月

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